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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
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0 posted 2001-05-18 10:59 PM



   She's my Nightbird
flying through my dreams
I wish I could keep her all for me
But tomorrow I have to set her free

All these tears I shed
I must dry when the sun leaves his bed
Cage my Nightbird for me to show
Until I realize she doesn't love me so
Fly on Nightbird

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

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pharon
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alabama
1 posted 2001-05-18 11:20 PM


...wow...
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision
2 posted 2001-05-18 11:41 PM


ewok i love this. goin to my library for sures. dude i cant believe u say ur poems sux cuz every single one ive read ive loved!!
this one is just amazing. i love the concept.
great job best friend best friend! *hugs*
i love you  
'tiif'

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

knightlyshadows
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obscured vision
3 posted 2001-05-18 11:41 PM


*clicks on da lil button down theres*

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

banburycross
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viginia
4 posted 2001-05-19 10:52 AM


interesting, i like this a lot.  very cool image and i like the way you ended this piece.  keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope
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5 posted 2001-05-19 04:10 PM


I felt that it ending too quickly. I thought you could have added a bit more before the ending. Anyhow it was still a good read.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?
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6 posted 2001-05-21 02:30 AM


this was  a nice poem...images were great...thanks for the read and keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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