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Heaven
New Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 8

0 posted 2001-05-18 07:49 PM

EVERY MORNING
I WAKE UP
AND PUT ON FIRST THING
A MASK OF MAKEUP
I TRY SO HARD
TO DISGUISE MY SORROW
I WON'T FALL APART
OR LET MY TEARS FLOW
THE WORLD IS A STAGE
AND I AM THE STAR
I'M ON THE EDGE
'BOUT TO FALL SO FAR
I CAN'T LET YOU SEE
THE WAY I REALLY AM
YOU WON'T LOVE ME
IF I UNLEASH THE DAM
EVERY NIGHT I CRY
TO RELEASE THE HURT WITHIN
EVERYDAY I TRY
YOUR HEART I WISH TO WIN
NOW TO BE WITH YOU
I KNOW I HAVE TO HIDE
ALL ABOUT ME THAT'S TRUE
ALL THAT IS INSIDE

Love is a tragedy
Friends never last
I fear the future
and regret the past

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-18 08:02 PM

this is really sad.....you should be able to be yourself....let people love you, for you

SEA

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

2 posted 2001-05-18 08:14 PM

i like this alot..and i think alotta ppl hide behind makeup. it really sux that ppl have to do that and the way you describe it it sounds like u hide your personality too. and thats not kosher i say try to just be yourself one day youll feel alot better

*KiMMiE*

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

3 posted 2001-05-18 08:41 PM

very cool hun you should be able to be free with who you are and other ppl need to deal with it cuz your awesome as you if ya ever need to talk i am always here

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

ShortSexyAngel777
New Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 9
Louisiana, USA

4 posted 2001-05-18 11:00 PM

wow. thats a lot of how i act. im very afraid to let people get to know me, and i hide behind a lot of things, such as make up. every time i feel im about to cry, i tell myself, stoppit maryn, you cant let them see you cry. its weak. anyways, it really hit home with me. good job!

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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5 posted 2001-05-19 12:19 PM

Wow i know exactly how you feel. You've worded this very well and this is a powerful poem. Keep posting more!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-19 03:55 PM

If you can't be yourself while being in love with a certain person then you shouldn't be in love with that person. You should be yourself.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-05-21 02:40 AM

this is sad but true in many lives...thnaks for shaing and i hope u the best and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

8 posted 2001-05-26 11:03 AM

This one was really sad, you should always be able to be yourself but i understand where you're coming from. Great poem i liked it a lot

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

9 posted 2001-05-26 11:37 AM

I think a lot of people can relate to this, especally teens. We all have some sort of mask that we hide under, and we all have our parts that we play in life... but you shouldn't let the mask and the part become all people see of you. Hope you come out of that shell! Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

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