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Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-05-18 03:29 PM

Is it a possibility
to love and not know it?
And for him to care, too,
but never really show it?

Can it really happen?
Can you love and not realize,
and even when he’s gone,
your love remains disguised?

Did it happen to you, dear,
or did you know you loved me,
and your fear of deep love
simply made you flee?

And did it happen to me, too?
Is this why I cry,
because I cared for you so,
but didn’t know love was why?

Were we in love?
Did the symptoms show?
It’s sadly too bad that
I’ll never, ever know...

So what do you guys think? Is it possible?

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

1 posted 2001-05-18 03:49 PM

OMG OMG OMG!!

this is simply amazing... you describe how i feel soooooo well... i absolutely love it. wow... this left me amazed and speechless.... wow. *L*

Love,
Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-05-18 04:38 PM

I really like this piece... and yes, I believe it can happen, although it's never happened to me. Great piece, thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

dramaqueen22086
Member

since 2001-05-05

Posts 50
Hadlyme, CT

3 posted 2001-05-18 04:53 PM

I especially liked this section a lot…. I think you are a very good, writer, you should put some of your stuff in a poem… and sell it I know I would buy it, if it were me…. seriously job again
~!kellie!~

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

4 posted 2001-05-18 04:54 PM

suga
i feel i can connect with you very well
i love your poems they remind me of
experiences i have had in the past
i do beleive that your words are true

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-05-18 04:54 PM

suga
i feel i can connect with you very well
i love your poems they remind me of
experiences i have had in the past
i do beleive that your words are true

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

6 posted 2001-05-18 04:56 PM

Suga
i loved your poem
i do beleive what you wrote
becoz i know what it's like first hand

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

7 posted 2001-05-18 04:56 PM

Suga
i loved your poem
i do beleive what you wrote
becoz i know what it's like first hand

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

8 posted 2001-05-18 06:16 PM

definetly true...you can feel something for someone so deep you dont know what it is but you're too afraid to find out so you just let it slip away...sucks huh

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

9 posted 2001-05-18 06:25 PM

very cool i love the way you write keep it up ok i love ya

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

10 posted 2001-05-19 03:36 PM

This was well done. So well done that Angel replied 4 times...in pairs!
Anyway....I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

thedarkangel
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since 2001-05-12

Posts 74
~*~the cutest~*~

11 posted 2001-05-20 01:45 PM

wow that's amazing! i loved it! a new thread 2 my library i feel!
love peace and eyeliner
angel
-x-

tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial for what it's worth it was worth all the while - Green Day

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

12 posted 2001-05-20 04:07 PM

this flowed very nicely, i like the format of this piece. yes i think it is very possible, i know exactly how you feel. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

13 posted 2001-05-21 01:54 AM

great poem and it showed emotions written so well...the ending was sad yet...powerful...keep writing sara...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

14 posted 2001-05-22 08:01 AM

Im not really shur if its possible actually...but they were food for thought! I hope you have you questions answered. Good job

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

15 posted 2001-05-22 08:18 AM

Great poem although I don't think that I can match four replies...

Zu

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

16 posted 2001-05-22 06:51 PM

I personally didn't like this one as much as some of your others, but it was still a nice read.

I see you touched many people more than me, though, so it must just be my funny taste.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

17 posted 2001-05-22 06:57 PM

Hey Suga!
I really enjoyed this poem!
it really touched my heart
and i do beleive what you say is true
you have to look at a person in
a certain way to love them
keep writing I want to see more!

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