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Sappy love poem |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Sappy love poem Heres my sappy love poem filled with roses and violets hearts filled with blind happiness its really too bad how the guys follow us girls like meek little lambs "mary had a little lamb followed her....." How we girls starve ourselves to become beautiful...... Don't you all see how love can be so beautiful It plays the role of death in a figurative manner a daring love triangle ends in death lover one cheats on lover two everyone is happy in this joyless love blanck ecstasy turns into forced urges to conquer and ravish All within a sappy love poem.... Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was quite powerful...i liked this poem a lot..."great sappy love poem"...thanks for the read tho...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-18-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this certainly wasn't what i was expecting when i opened the thread, you really forced the reader to pay careful attention with your choice of words along with the title. this is really well written, every line is filled with power. keep sharing your work with all of us  Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Quite well done.....a sappy love poem with a twist! Oooooooo i liked it!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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