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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Within these walls lies a secret down the halls there is a terror a soul piercing scream fills the room as this evil chooses you you'll be it's next victim there is nothing you can do it sees within your soul and knows whats in your heart your fear is it's goal it's spends it's dreaming of tearing you apart but it's ok don't be worried... ...it's only society... "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hah..... burn society...  Nice work POA... take some time to read and reply maybe, if you want more responses to your own work. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well done...i liked how you wrote this poem...interetsing to say if you havent titled it "society"i would of read it differently...anyways..thanks for sharing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i certainly enjoyed the thought behind this piece, the concept is a good one and you expressed it well in your writing. keep posting and replying. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really good  SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I have discussed society hours on end throughout my life...no more please!!!! haha....anyway i really liked this poem. very well done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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