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Hidden
Junior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 18
Lost in my own world

0 posted 2001-05-17 09:41 AM

Nothing to Lose

I've got nothing left to lose
Nothing to hide
No where to go
Just time to bide
What do you do
When you have no where to turn
Just sit back and watch
Watch and learn.

**I know that God wouldn't give me anything I can't handle, I just wish he didn't trust me so much.**

[This message has been edited by Hidden (edited 05-18-2001).]

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

1 posted 2001-05-17 09:46 AM

I really like this one. Just remember, you do have people to turn to. Keep your head up high.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-05-18 09:09 AM

you put a lot of emotion into a short piece, great job on this poem. i hope things get better, please wrtie me if you need someone to talk to. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-05-18 09:10 AM

I definetly know what you're talking about in this poem.It's a pretty sad thing to be able to realate to, but I'm with the response b-4 mine. You do have ppl. to turn to. They'll always be someone who understands. Good luck hun. Feel better soon.
~britt~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-05-19 12:03 PM

I can relate to this too...your poem was short and sweet and just so powerful...amazing job on this one. By the way i loved your quote about god

mistic
Member

since 2001-05-06

Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.

5 posted 2001-05-19 12:48 PM

This is nice

lots of emotion which is good

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

6 posted 2001-05-19 01:48 PM

I love poems that are short and chock full of emotion. and this was definitely one of them! *L* i relate very well... and even more with your signature! LOL that was cute.
this is def. headin into my library

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-19 04:14 PM

I liked the poem and what you said at the end caught my eye. Well said! i enjoyed this one a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-05-21 02:28 AM

this poem was great and the last line was what hit me...i liked this poem a lot...thanks for the read...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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