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Hallow tears |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Your words echo Through the night As you sit up Crying those hallow tears Not for one second Will I believe That your soul could ever conceive True sincerity Nor will I ever for one second Let my defenses back down As you lie crying upon the rain sodden ground You should have thought of all of this once before You spat in my face and walked out that door You accused my heart Of unmeasurable sins All because I cared and allowed you in How dare you Point the finger of blame all on me Just because of all of your insecurities Maybe one day You'll find the way To love yourself and believe in all I had to say But until then I will not Have anything to do with you Nor ever fall for your hallow tears "Let me be the one you call, if you jump I'll break your fall, lift you up and fly away with you into the night" ~Crash and Burn~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
wow, great job on this. the ending really hit me hard, this is powerful writing. great job, keep sharing all your poetry  Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I must agree this one was very powerful. Especially this last lines. Keep it up. *~*Amanda*~* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...i enjoye dit lots...this was nice writing...powerful as well...thanks for sharing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ouch! Give this person what they deserve! A kick in the teeth and a happy new year! OK, maybe not that far...  Be strong though. It's good to read that you aren't going to be falling for their tears anymore. Nice writing. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is really a poem i should be printing out and giving it to someone i know. But unfortunately i cant leave them because i care for them too much. Its such a difficult situation but i think you made the right choice. Excellent poem |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done....this was very raw and emotional. I did enjoy this one quite a bit!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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