Teen Poetry #4 |
teen love |
baby0508 Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 58Moodus, Connecticut |
What the heart says. I find myself in dreams of how I wish we were today It's only in my dreams That we are this way. We are no longer one, and so then we must be two? But deep within my heart I feel, that inbetween lies me and you. I wish that we were closer, and not so far apart. You also need to learn how how to listen to your heart. If you listen close you'll hear, what it has to say and if you listen close enough it will lead you the right way. So please listen to your heart and then maybe you will see that it's saying to you, that you should be with me. |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
This poemis soo sweet and kinda sad.Hopefully whoever it is will come to thier senses. Good job sweetie ~britt~ If you live to be 100 years old, I want to live to be 101 so I never have to live a day without you. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to Passions!! this is a wonderful first post, so sweet i hope you decide to stay with us for a long time and keep sharing all your work with us. keep posting and replying Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
WELCOME! This is a really nice first post. It's a really nice piece. Glad to see you here and I hope to see you here more. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Welcome to passions, great first post I really enjoyed the read. Hope to see more of your work soon. Marshal Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This is great first post and I can really relate to it Keep posting! , Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! Please check your email for a special greeting..... SEA |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very good job! Welcome to Passions!!!! I enjoyed this very much. Quite sweet and I hope that you get what you want I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! a *wonderful* first post!! you must keep sharing!! *s* Stace |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
welcome welcome welcome...hope you like it here...and this poem was sweet and very nice...i enjoyed it lots...and hope to see more...cya~... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Welcome to Passions What a wonderful first post. You can't always have what you want so think big and you never know what might happen. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
First of all... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! I really enjoyed thish first post of yours...I really thought this was my fav stanza "We are no longer one, and so then we must be two? But deep within my heart I feel, that inbetween lies me and you." It really had a lotta meaning to me. N e way thanks for the read and i cant wait to see more from you in the future!! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Your first post is most heart felt. You would love it here. I do hope you enjoy sharing your words as much as reading ours "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
this was so good! *L* i loved it! i can relate, but keep your head up and soon enough they will realize what a kick-butt person you are! *L* great poem! Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
great one really hit the spot..keep it up *dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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