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vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

0 posted 2001-05-16 10:31 AM

Let me know what you think...Thanks!

~*Nikki*~
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~*Scapegoat*~

Trapped in this hellhole,
where nothing goes right.
The scapegoat for everyone's problems,
I can't escape from their sight.
If something goes wrong,
you might as well look my way.
Of course it's my fault,
what else can I say?
It's my fault you're so stressed,
and my fault when you're sad.
And when you shout and scream at me,
it's my fault that you're mad.
Just take your burdens
and throw them ontop of me.
There's already so many there,
What's another two or three?
Nothing has to be your fault,
as long as I'm alive.
I'm the human scapegoat-Just for you,
for as long as I survive.
Got more troubles?
Give them to me,
they'll fit with the others just fine.
But the real dilemma
does not come up,
until I have to deal with mine.

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-05-16 10:42 AM

*HUG* i know how you feel, it's bad times to be the one people dump thngs on. i hope the situation improves and if you do need someone to talk to send me an email. you did a great job on this piece, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-05-16 10:57 AM

Great piece of work... only wish that i had gotten to it first... anyway I really thought I could empathise with this one and if you want anyone to talk to you could e-mail me.
Marshal Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

E-mail/Msn: Targetmrzu@hotmail.com

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-05-16 01:52 PM

Nikki:
I already read this the other day in class, but I want to tell ya what i think. This is a really great poem(like all yours

) but why are they all so sad hun? luv ya, and I'll talk to you soon.
~britt~

If you live to be 100 years old, I want to live to be 101 so I never have to live a day without you.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

4 posted 2001-05-16 01:54 PM

Awesome. I liked this alot, I totally know how this feels. The whole world has to come crashing down on top of you at once.And usually in my case, it stays there. Great job, I hope things go better for you
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

5 posted 2001-05-16 02:14 PM

*gives nikki and big ole love filled hug* hi hun that was an amazing poem i can relate to it soo well thank you hun love ya bye

ben

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

6 posted 2001-05-16 02:14 PM

woops sorry folks

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-16-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-05-17 02:27 AM

this was a very emotional piece...with so much pain in it...i felt it...but see i wish i can help you but all i can say is words so i just hope things gets better and just hang in there thru the toughest situations and things hopefully will get better...so yea..keep writing and thanks for sharing nikki...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2001-05-17 11:53 AM

Thank you guys, I really appreciate your compassion!

I'm also glad u liked this one...Thank u.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-05-18 02:55 PM

Great job on the poem. I really liked it. You are a very talented writer. I always look forward to your poems.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-05-18 03:04 PM

wow...this is really great

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-06-04 05:58 PM

~*hugs*~
I think you should stay away from people like that. Though I'm afraid that it my be a family member that you're talking about.
~*hugs*~

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

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