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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“I miss you” I miss you With all my heart Body and soul But this is something you shall never know I miss you My heart aches Knowing that you broke it But you shall never know the way I feel I miss you yearning for your sweet embrace Knowing that I shall never hold you again But you shall never know the pain I bare I miss you My soul bleeds To be complete once more But you shall never know my emptiness I miss you feeling the pain Through the emptiness I miss you… But you shall never know It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sad but touching poem...i liked it...thanks for the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Aye, I agree, that is a very sad poem. I hope things start looking up. Heh, every time I see someone sad I get this urge to cheer them up.  though I'm not sure how often I succeed.. oh well, nm that. I liked the poem quite a bit."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wow great poem I really liked it even though it was sad well done.Mr mr Zu. " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I thought this was really good,and sad. Maybe you should let the person know how you feel, at least you'd get it out. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
Aww... I know the feeling. You'll be okay. Don't worry... On a happier note: Awsome poem hun. ~britt~ If you live to be 100 years old, I want to live to be 101 so I never have to live a day without you. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Somehow it's always the ppl you miss the most that never know it...You wrote this really well and I enjoyed reading it. I hope that you are someday reunited with the person that you miss so dearly. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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*~valeria~* Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 10East Haddam, CT |
hey hun. don't worry about it i know exactly what you are going through and yeah it does suck a lot but cheer up and think of the things that make you smile!! *~*~VALERIA~*~* |
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*~valeria~* Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 10East Haddam, CT |
hey hun. don't worry about it i know exactly what you are going through and yeah it does suck a lot but cheer up and think of the things that make you smile!! *~*~VALERIA~*~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done, but sad. I hope things get better for you!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That is really sad. Hope things get better for you and keep writing cause it helps release the hirt "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yes I agree that writing helps to vent anger and pain. And this is very sad, but written well. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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