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soulfulpoet
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0 posted 2001-05-14 06:47 PM


I've lost myself in the pain
I'm a fallen angel
a lost soul tainted and disturbed.
I've been numbing my thoughts,
But the pain just gets worse.

Please save me, help me out.
I need to get out of here.
All I feel is anger, frustration.
Save me from myself.
Don't leave me here alone.
Please

We all feel hurt,
but why am i hurting myself?
I'm killing myself,
and I can't stop.
I can't run or hide anymore.
I'kll let the pain devour me now
I'm sorry
I'm sorry
goodbye

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1 posted 2001-05-14 06:53 PM


If you need someone to talk to, I'm here. Just email me ok? You aren't alone and yes, I really do care   Hugs to you    SEA
soulfulpoet
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2 posted 2001-05-14 06:56 PM


thanks, its good to know that i have someone i can talk to   it means a lot
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3 posted 2001-05-14 07:20 PM


i felt this poem..and it is sad but so many people go through it unoticed as i do...i enjoyed the read and related to it alot as hope you keep your head up and stay strong...hope to see more... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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The offer is very real....I'm here if you need it.   Feel free ok?    SEA
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5 posted 2001-05-14 08:02 PM


this is really powerful writing, you truly are a soulful poet.  and when you are here with everyone at passions, you can never be all alone    drop me a line if you need to talk.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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6 posted 2001-05-15 02:27 AM


I enjoyed the poem, but I hope all goes ok with you here on out.
Good luck

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-05-15 09:09 AM


You've shown so much pain.  I too am here if you need someone to talk to.  You can see my icq number from above, just add me   ~*hugs*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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8 posted 2001-05-15 11:55 AM


This was really, really sad...Kind of sounded like some sort of cry for help...I'm sure anyone on here would listen to you if you just need someone to talk to, myself included..I know what it feels like to hurt, trust me, and you can E-mail anytime CrzySmoothie@aol.com  Good luck.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

soulfulpoet
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9 posted 2001-05-15 07:01 PM


thanks all of you for wupporting me   writing is one of the only ways i can show how i feel, cause i dont feel comfortable talking to people about my feelings. thanks a lot  
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10 posted 2001-05-15 09:28 PM


This was beautifully written ::hugs::  hun
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11 posted 2001-05-15 09:32 PM


:::lotsa hugs:::  it was a good poem..but if ya ever need to talk i-m me on aim at cutiekimmie86  k?
          *KiMMiE*

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