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Box of Memories |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA 
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I wrote this one a while ago, but I lost it under my bed until last night *LOL* So, here it is! I have this box of memories, some are good and some are bad. But this box is never opened, for its contents make me sad. Pictures, notes, and trinkets, old poems, given and reclaimed, cards and movie ticket stubs... remnants of old flames. Although the past is over, and I’ve learned to carry on, memories of past loves remain, though the love itself is gone. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was good work...not your best... but still very good. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job..i really enjoyed this poem...the you wrote this was pleasing...thanks for the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really good because it flowed so well, and it had a really good meaning to it. I like the way you said so much in just a few stanzas. Good work!  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked it! What's a trinket though? hehe....oh well....so sue me, I'm Javier...I don't know everything! Especially what a trinket is....we don't have that word here in PR considering erm....erm....we speak...erk...SPANISH!!!! Ok so yea tell me!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
*LMAO*@Javi... Haha! Sorry hun, a trinket is 1. a small ornament, such as a piece of jewelry, or 2. a trivial thing, a trifle... I use it as meaning 2, something of little ACTUAL significance or value... but to me, it DOES have value... get it? Good!!  ,Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it's never wrong to look back in life and think of those sweet or not so sweet memories. And yes, i don't know what a trinket is too  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well now everybody knows what a trincket is....hooray!!!!! |
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Dana Samples Member
since 2001-04-07
Posts 68 |
hey i thought it was niffty. its short but sweet and gets right to the point. i liked it. lots of love, dana |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Liked the poem. HaHa- I thought I was the only one who lost things in the wreckage that is known as my bedroom- ECSPECIALLY under my bed. HaHa. Anyway- Like I said- Good poem. Something I can relate to. I think I have kept every note ever passed my direction. I LOVE going back and reading them...It reminds me of who I liked and so on. HaHa... |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
I liked this a lot, and i even knew what a trinket was (a knick knack type thing, right?)! Keep posting!"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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