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Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

0 posted 2001-05-13 10:18 PM

To be honest- I don't write poetry unless I have to for a Language class or something. But I got bored one day and tried writing down thoughts in my head.
I'm far from Emily Dickinson...infact- as I said in The Ally- all poetry of mine is very elementry. I know nothing about the rules and so on...I just do it for fun. Hopefully that'll explain it. HaHa. =)

                Relishing on all that is you
                      Eternity together.
              Living our lives as a unit of one
                    Appreciating eachother.
             Teaching eachother new things daily
                        Inlove Forever.
            Over looking negativity and bad habits
                        Never giving up.
           Sharing deep secrets of wishes and dreams
                       Holding one-another.
          Initiating kisses when one is sad or upset
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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-14 12:05 PM

good job...you shouldnt give up and say you cant write but insteda write it not only on specail occasion..hope to see more tho...thanks for the reda...

...?

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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-05-14 10:35 AM

I thought this was really good and I hope to see more of you in teen #4 in the future.

Mr mr Zu

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vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

3 posted 2001-05-14 06:24 PM

Oh this was really good, didn't sound very elementary to me! Hope to see more from you.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-05-15 04:33 PM

Wow.
People actually read my "poetry" and liked it? Or were you guys just being nice cause I'm a newbie? ...then again- does it matter?
Thanks for taking the time to read it, and for taking even more time to comment on it. I appreciate it alot.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-18 05:11 PM

They were being nice

Well I see you started to post up poetry....Oooooooo...Mwahahahahaha

Well I enjoyed this. You write well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-21 09:33 AM

I don't belive this to be elementary writing. You have more talent in you than you think. Keep it up.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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