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MindlessPoet
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since 2001-04-20
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0 posted 2001-05-13 10:03 PM


here's the poem I wrote for my mom for Mother's Day.

On this special day,
I wrote this for you.
And I'd just like to say
Mom, I love you.

I give you my thanks
For everything you've done
Because I know it isn't easy
And it isn't always fun.

And when something goes wrong
And you think you've made a bad call,
Just remember this poem
And know you've done nothing wrong at all.

For you, Mom, did everything
That was in your power to do.
And if you thought it was possible,
You would give us the stars, too.

I won't be here forever;
It's a sad fact, but true.
But when I'm gone, just remember
I'm thankful for everything you do.

On this special day,
I wrote this for you.
And I'd just like to say
Mom, I love you.

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

[This message has been edited by MindlessPoet (edited 05-13-2001).]

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knightlyshadows
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1 posted 2001-05-13 10:09 PM


i liked this. it really shows that u care for her alot. its a great tribute. thanx for sharing.
tiff

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"You say i only hear what i want too..."

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2 posted 2001-05-14 12:10 PM


this was a nice poem..i bet your moms loved this...yea i thought you did a great job... ...?

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banburycross
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viginia
3 posted 2001-05-14 01:20 PM


you did a really great job, this is the best kind of gift on mothers day, i'm sure she liked this a lot.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
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East Haddam, CT
4 posted 2001-05-14 06:17 PM


Awww this was so nice!! I'm sure your mommy loved it! I was going to write a poem 4 mi mamasita 4 mommy day, cept my brain kinda died on me so ended up being cheap and giving her a poem written by someone else (yes i gave credit 2 the author) LOL.  GOod job.

~*NikkI*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

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5 posted 2001-05-15 03:46 AM


Sweet poem for a sweet mother, no doubt.
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 2001-05-24 04:19 PM


Mother's will be really proud of you

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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