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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-05-13 08:22 PM


I’m sorry I cried
I really didn’t mean to
I didn’t want you to see
All the pain I hold inside
I’ve held inside a long while
You weren’t supposed to see
You weren’t supposed to know
I cried, I’m sorry
You’re the only one
That I have left
No one else loves me
They all hate me now
What did I do wrong?
I’m sorry I cried
Even the ones I called “friend”
Have left me behind
I am nothing –
Not worth caring about
I cried, I’m sorry.

Those girls on TV don't know that being
36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless
you got the face to back it up

© Copyright 2001 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
Chel
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1 posted 2001-05-13 08:27 PM


Emotional piece, kind of sounds like something I would write, but you did a better job.  Keep your head up, and the great work.

Chel

"True friends stab you in the front."
"You are special and unique in your own way." "Always remember compliments you received; forget about the rude

stace_co2003
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2 posted 2001-05-13 08:29 PM


oh...no...you are, you are, you are, you ARE worth caring about!!!!
*hugs*
I hope everything goes back to normal...and if they weren't there when you needed them, they aren't really friends. hold your head up high, and keep right on smiling....it makes people wonder what you are thinking!!

*s*
Stace

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viginia
3 posted 2001-05-13 08:50 PM


this is a really well written poem.  you conveyed the feeling perfectly to the reader and put a lot of yourself into this.  great job, keep writing.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-05-14 12:17 PM


great job on putting your emotions in this poem..i felted it i liekd it and hope things are better... ......

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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5 posted 2001-05-14 08:35 AM


Tamma, what's going on??? Something is. I can tell. You should never say you're sorry for crying.  It's how you feel at that moment that causes those tears and if they come, then there's a pretty *DARN* good reason for that.  Don't ever let anyone make you feel sorry for anything you do, unless it's truly bad.  That's just the way you feel at that given time. anyways, great poem.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

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6 posted 2001-05-15 03:36 AM


Well if this is about your love life then I could see why. It seems to be quite complex...I wish the best for you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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7 posted 2001-05-16 05:15 AM


Tamma, this doesn't sound a good situation at all. Try to pull through it. Most people are so completely and utterly moronic when it comes to things like this that they don't see when they are hurting a friend.
Keep your head up and if worse comes to worse, hit them with a wooden spoon.  

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

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8 posted 2001-05-17 07:39 PM


~*hugs Tamma*~
don't make your love life so complicated  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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