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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
taken in a blink of my eye her life just snuffed out no longer there to hold my hand to tuck me in and kiss my brow to wake me up by tickling me no more watching old black&white movies together no more just talking about nothing in particular no more laughing at the same places no more you i miss you i love you Happy Mother's Day September 23, 1950 - January 4, 1998 “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "You say i only hear what i want too..." [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-13-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hmmm...your mother not with you right now huh?..this had a sad feeling coming towards me and i felt it deep maybe cuz i can relate in a different way...thanks for sharing..  ...?[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-13-2001).] |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Mother's Day really takes a hit on most people. Thank you for sharing your words. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This is a good poem, it had very real feelings coming out of it. Thank you for sharing this! "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm so sorry that your mother isn't around anymore, but I'm sure that she's proud of the writer that you have become. This is a beautiful tribute to her, thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Awwwwwwwww. I know you said it's Ok, but this one is Sad. It pulls your heart to your stomach and tears from your eyes. *hugs* Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually... |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oh my... this is so sad  But, no matter what, your mother will always be with you no matter where you are, smiling and watching down over you-- after all, her love still lives  nice poem! ,Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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That girl Megz cant write New Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 7State: Confusion |
TifF....you are my "sister"....so, therefore...Barbie is your "mom"! and she loves you to death and so do I! and I know what she would say.... " *lix* " heheh...Love ya mucho!!! |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
that was great...I loved it. and I'm sorry!! I don't know you all that well, but I look forward to getting to know you!! *hugs* Stace |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
This piece was very heartfelt. I enjoyed this piece, but it probably affected me in a different way. Keep writing though. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sad poem. It really did show me a true gratitude for having what I have....this being a mother. I really do offer my condolences....I enjoyed the poem very much.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You just made me cry I'm a mama's boy and I love my mom so much This makes me wonder how you can cope with her loss geez...im really teary eyed  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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