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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-12 03:56 PM

sorry if theres any mistakes in this or w/e im in a hurry....late for a weddin

*hugs* thanx o and btw did i spell losing right?

You finally lost the battle
You struggled for so long
Spent years trying to defeat
Something more powerful then you

You fooled yourself into thinking
YOu had gained a foot hold
Then you lost your grip
And sunk down deeper then before

You played the game very well
Better tehn anyone else had
You realized that to win
you have to lose

For no one can escape the grasp of death

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"u say i only here wut i want too..."

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-12-2001).]

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

1 posted 2001-05-12 04:03 PM

Wow, very powefull, I like it alot, especially the end. Oh, and hope you got to the wedding in time

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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2 posted 2001-05-12 04:33 PM

"You realized that to win
you have to lose"

I liked those lines the best. Great piece.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-12 04:47 PM

You finally lost the battle
You struggled for so long
Spent years trying to defeat
Something more powerful then you..

those verses gave me something to think about...thanks for the read..i liked it...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

4 posted 2001-05-12 08:19 PM

Groovy
or yia

Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually...

Why do people remind me of vacuums?

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-13 11:21 AM

the two pieces i've read by you this morning have been incredible, i like this a lot. great job on this poem, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-05-13 11:33 AM

Tiffy girl.....this is really touching. Sometimes letting go and loosing this fight is the right thing.....it's never easy tho.

SEA

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-16 10:28 AM

It's not the fight that matters, but how life is lived before it eventually comes. very emotional piece. thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-05-17 07:46 PM

This was nice. I enjoyed it tiff!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cheerleader_gal4life
New Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 6

9 posted 2001-05-17 08:50 PM

Wow Tiffany. That was a great poem. You are good at it. Oh and I hope the wedding goes well.

God Bless,

Cherish

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

10 posted 2001-05-18 01:40 PM

*shall sum this awesome and amazing piece up in one word* FUNKY

ben

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
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