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Nights Alone |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
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“Nights Alone” Standing beneath these gleaming orbs of destiny I bow my head to in hopes of becoming free Dreaming of things that only I shall know Wishing for something in life to show Many a night spent alone beneath those lights Praying that my wishes come true upon that night Dreaming dreams of a love so true Wishing upon a star for one like you The day then came when you lit my way Like the dawning sun as it casts its first shining ray The dreams I had been dreaming suddenly came true All those wishes came to be, the moment I met you Joyful days filled with many memories For now you have set me free The dreams still not yet known My wishes still sought to be shown Forgotten paths upon the roads of life Lead me to believe I feel something other then strife Dreaming of things which can never be Wishing that I knew what’s wrong with me Actions and endings upon the path Forgetting how to add this math I know dream no dreams of grand design Letting go of wishes that once were mine But that can never be For I still think of you in love you see I guess that’s what happens by far When one wishes upon a star It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Hacas Junior Member
since 2001-05-05
Posts 25 |
I really enjoyed this poem...very beautiful!  "Fight for what you believe in" "Stay yourself no matter what people say" [This message has been edited by Hacas (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was such a beautiful piece i loved it to be honest...great poem..i related to every word in every verse written very well..keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not your best, but I did like it. The ending .....very good.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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