Bff - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

0 posted 2001-05-12 01:30 PM

I dedicate this to all of my friends, cuz they are, after all, what inspired me to write this poem.

Best friends forever

When life starts to get too hard,
And you don’t know what to do,
Just know that I will always be here
To guide and comfort you.

When the problems become to much,
Instead of worrying yourself to death,
Come to me, and I’ll help you see,
And I’ll try to cheer you up, MUCH!

But then again, when I need a friend,
Please don’t turn your back.
Because we say we’ll be there till the end,
Please just stay my friend

And as High School ends,
Hold me tight in your heart and don’t let go.
And I’ll think of you, and pray for you
Until my life comes to an end.

For right now, though, we say:
“Best friends till the end!!”
And right now, how I pray!!
That it’ll never be the end.

But I know somewhere along the way,
When life’s road has ceased to stretch
That you’ll be in heaven waiting for me
With you arms open wipe and outstretched.

When life’s problems get you down,
And you don’t know what to do,
Just know that I’ll always be here,
To guide and comfort you.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-12 01:33 PM

i really like how youw ritten this...touching poem...thanks for the raed...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

2 posted 2001-05-12 01:34 PM

this was cute, keep writing,
ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2001-05-12 01:36 PM

awww how great is this......so sweet lol
i just graduated last year so i know how u feels lol

like this alot and i hope ur friends stay ur friends

And as High School ends,
Hold me tight in your heart and don’t let go.
And I’ll think of you, and pray for you
Until my life comes to an end.....

...But I know somewhere along the way,
When life’s road has ceased to stretch
That you’ll be in heaven waiting for me
With you arms open wipe and outstretched.
^ i loved that *points* good job hun

tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"u say i only here wut i want too..."

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2001-05-12 07:15 PM

Great job on the poem I really enjoyed it well done and I hope to see more of you around here

Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

E-mail/Msn: Targetmrzu@hotmail.com

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

5 posted 2001-05-12 09:55 PM

this is so sweet! i logve it. good job.
keep it up
kate

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-05-12 10:07 PM

Awww this is such a sweet poem!!!! I wish there were more people like you where i live...i dont think many of my friends would be able to write the words that you wrote and actually mean it...excellent job and they are very lucky to have you!

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

7 posted 2001-05-12 11:51 PM

I think the tone really sounded sincere in this one, good job of expressing yourself through this poem!

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

8 posted 2001-05-13 11:24 AM

this is a really sweet piece, you expressed your feelings really well in this. great writing, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-05-15 10:42 AM

I've been imperssed with your 2 poems that I last read. Full of emotions. Keep it up Stace. Keeps sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

10 posted 2001-05-15 02:56 PM

Well done on this one stace. I fully enjoyed this tribute to your friends. Keep the love strong!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.