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Teen Poetry #4

What is war good for

Hacas
Junior Member

since 2001-05-05

Posts 25

0 posted 2001-05-12 12:53 PM

This is a short but powerful poem which I wrote in 'bout a minute or so, I hope you like it

War is starting,
Soldiers are fighting,
Families are waiting.

War is ending,
Soldiers are dying,
Families are crying.

"Fight for what you believe in"
"Stay yourself no matter what people say"

[This message has been edited by Hacas (edited 05-12-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-12 01:12 PM

i really liked this poem....short but powerful...and very real..its sad but its something at times had to happen...thanks for sharing...great job....

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Angel Bee
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since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

2 posted 2001-05-12 01:35 PM

short and sweet, good reality poem, keep writing, ab

*~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~*

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

3 posted 2001-05-12 03:58 PM

I like this one...short but powerfull, gets the message through. Keep on writing

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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-05-14 06:24 PM

simply perfect
you've described all about war in such short a poem
amazing
~*applauds*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Hacas
Junior Member

since 2001-05-05

Posts 25

5 posted 2001-05-14 07:48 PM

Thanks everyone!

Love
Ryan

"Fight for what you believe in"
"Stay yourself no matter what people say"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-05-18 05:02 PM

Ryan, it was short and to the point.
I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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