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HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-05-11 12:40 PM

Gone

When I lost you
I lost everything
Nothing else matters
No one has a clue
What hurts the most
Is I don't have you.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-05-11 06:10 PM

Hmm... I don't think it's healthy to put so much into one person other than yourself. I think that you should try to regain some self-respect and do without the person, you may have become addicted to them.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-12 12:51 PM

short but went straight to the point..great job and keep writing..

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2001-05-12 11:27 AM

twas short and powerful! love thos

hope everything bes okays with yous *hugs*
give me a hollaw if ya ever needs to talks!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"u say i only here wut i want too..."

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-05-12 11:32 AM

"addictated" allan.....

This was a VERY good poem.
I understand your hurt because ive lost everything...when I lost my bestfriend. Youll get through it.
if u ever need to talk email me or something

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

5 posted 2001-05-12 01:28 PM

i really liked this a lot. i thought it was very good,it was short yet powerful. i can fully relate to this. i am adding this to my library.i hope things get better for ya.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-14 06:14 PM

Give it time and someone will come to your life and make you happy again

stay strong and keep writing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-15 02:29 PM

Very simply written, but a lot of emotion in this one. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

8 posted 2001-05-16 11:58 AM

Trust me, I know exactly how you feel. It is so hard to get over losing someone you love so much. My bf of one year just broke up with me, i am devistated and your poem made me cry.

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