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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-11 12:09 PM


i wait in anticipation
looking...waiting
so impatient
nervous...scared
i have to beat you
theres no other way
i have to get there first

why do grades have to come in the mail?

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-11 02:21 PM


lol*tiff
ha ha --- you shouldn't have to worry  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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2 posted 2001-05-11 06:20 PM


Heh..... this is great!  All the best humour in poetry is built up to and suddenly twisted in the end into a laugh... you did this excellently.  Very cute, Tiffer.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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viginia
3 posted 2001-05-12 01:01 AM


giggle giggle.  yay, you made me smile and i really haven't felt like smiling at all recently. thank you for posting this  

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-05-12 01:05 AM


hehe...i thought this was a very enjoyable read...thanks brought me a smile...when i needed it...thansk again... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

CwboyAtHeart
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5 posted 2001-05-12 01:14 AM


lol!  That was great.  I can relate to that one.  In fact, I should be watching the mail...  I think they're sent out soon.    Anyway, that made me laugh.  Very cool.

      - Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

katherine
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6 posted 2001-05-12 01:55 AM


hahahahaha this is cool!
katie

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

Wood_Stock
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7 posted 2001-05-12 02:45 AM


Nice one!

Very cheeky, I like it.

heh heh heh  <--  Still chuckling!!

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8 posted 2001-05-12 02:56 AM


ROFLMAO! Oh Tiffy girl.....you sound like me when I was in school LOL too funny.....I can SOOOO relate  
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9 posted 2001-05-12 07:51 AM


Oh yea... I understand this one....LOL
Nice job!

Jenn

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10 posted 2001-05-16 06:31 PM


Very well done. I liked the beginning of it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

MoeRocko
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11 posted 2001-05-16 06:37 PM


Lol  I know this feeling too :P  Good wun

Castles made of sand slip into Sea eventually...

Why do people remind me of vacuums?

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12 posted 2001-05-16 06:39 PM


Lucky me, my grades dont come in the mail. Cute poem!
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13 posted 2001-06-04 04:04 AM


Hi...don't mind me...was just in here foraging again and thought this was adorable! I love your sense of humor!  
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14 posted 2001-06-04 07:57 AM


oh i remeber when i got there first and trew them away lol but now that i dropped out i don't have to worry bout grades anymore.
robin

look tiff i got my own thing now aren't ou proud *lols*

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

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