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Allysa
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0 posted 2001-05-11 08:36 AM


There's some people who are crazy,
     

There's some who are blue,
     

There's some who do the cheering up,
     

And then there's the rest of you.
     
And then there's dopey.    
there's more to this, but I have to go to school.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

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1 posted 2001-05-11 08:42 AM


Haha, this was cool Allysa

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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2 posted 2001-05-11 09:39 AM


I'm loving it so far, so where's the rest  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 05-11-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-05-11 09:48 AM


Cool Allysa hehe very novel idea... I hope to see the rest soon.
Zu

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4 posted 2001-05-11 10:01 AM


This was a great beginning to th poem. cant wait to read the rest.

Regina

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To say these words to you"bon jovi

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5 posted 2001-05-11 10:31 AM


great job and i guess i'm the one in the  's........... .....great idea tho...cya~... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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6 posted 2001-05-11 11:36 AM


you made me giggle, tee hee. this is great, i'm very much looking forward to reading the rest of this.  

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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7 posted 2001-05-11 11:37 AM


LOL Allysa...can't wait to see the rest! I agree, Dopey is in a class all his own.
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8 posted 2001-05-11 05:32 PM


This is great, you're missing Acire.     
Oh and Ben and Tiff are also missing out of there.  
Ok.... reply ends before I break any guidelines...  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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9 posted 2001-05-16 02:19 AM


.........and then there's me?
what's that supposed to mean?  
Haha....finish it....i wanna hear about ME....I love hearing about me...cuz...yea...cuz....erm....yea

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allysa
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10 posted 2001-05-16 10:54 AM


Hey, Javi, or should I say Sexy?  Anyways, yes, I just love talking about you..........you're soooo special!!!! I LOVE YOU!!

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

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11 posted 2001-05-16 06:27 PM


And what am I?  Chopped liver?  Where's my name?  J/K!     Thats my fav smily, cuz I bounce in here whenever I get a chance.  Plus its really cute!  Hehe.

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

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