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The Wood_Stock Collection : - Kiss - |
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Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
A little analogy of mine... Enjoy. - First Kiss - As light meets shade, And the night awakes to day. The sun kisses the landscape, An awkward kiss, but the first one is always this way. The light clumsily probes, The shadows shrink away. In the moist moment of recognition, The world is no longer cold and grey. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice analogy! You captured the concept very professionally, I liked this a lot! Well written.  Maybe share more of these analogies?~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
This is incredible writing, the wording is absolutely beautiful. this one goes directly into my library, i hope you share more of these in the future Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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broken wing Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 37 |
great job! broken "To me, fair friend, u never can be old, |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm very very very impressed This is really good ~*stand up and applauds*~ keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here. I really liked this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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