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sleepymoongirl
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0 posted 2001-05-09 12:51 PM



Totally apart from the world
Trying to make a stronger connection
Looking for somthing worthwhile
Hunting for friends
That make life all that much more better
Makes all the pain you go through...
worth it
People who understand you
People you understand
Someone who is willing to put their trust in you
Someone you can trust too
A person who won't run
While you are bleeding in the street
Or stop to tell you why...
Who will hold your hand
Hunter of rainbows
A search of true friendship
That make life worthwhile
Hunter of rainbows
I'll be 'till I die

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

© Copyright 2001 Scarlet Saunders - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-09 01:12 AM


cool post..
liked it alot!

$ Jeff $   :  )

"If I'm not back in 5 minutes......just wait longer!"

"You may take our lives, but you'll never take our FREEDOM!

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-05-09 02:06 AM


Nice work.  I like the idea of "hunter of rainbows."  What a well-organized thought you had right there.  
Keep on sharing with us, Scarlet.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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3 posted 2001-05-09 03:21 AM


very good job...on the poem...i thought you did qutie well..on this..keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
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viginia
4 posted 2001-05-09 11:33 AM


i like the title of this and i like the concept behind this piece.  you did a great job on this, keep posting all your writing.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymousfemale
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5 posted 2001-05-09 12:50 PM


This title reall caught my attention. 'Hunter of Rainbows' is so unique. Kudos on that.

The piece itself is very nice. If it was written for someone specific, that person should be lucky.

Thanks for the read. It's going to the library.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

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6 posted 2001-05-09 02:58 PM


For some reason i felt such calmness and gentleness on this one.  Thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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7 posted 2001-05-15 03:31 AM


You did great on this one. I enjoyed it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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