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Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

0 posted 2001-05-07 02:43 PM

Okay y'all this is a repost from a while ago but it is my fave out of the ones i have written so i wanted to repost it

                          -=Burned=-

                   Hiding from the sun
                   For fear of getting burned
                   Showing no emotion
                   Beacause of what I've learned
                   My soul is red and welted
                   All because of you
                   I showed you that I cared
                   And got hurt through and through
                   The pain will last a while
                   I can't sleep because it stings
                   Try to push it from my mind
                   And think of other things
                   Friends try to make me laugh
                   But it only works for now
                   Like a sunburn cream
                   A cover will endow
                   When the burn goes away
                   It leaves a nice tan
                   One that shows lessons
                   All for love of one man.

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

1 posted 2001-05-07 02:49 PM

wow..since ive never seen ya in the forum b4 i thought u were new..but i guess not hehe..that was soooo good, i liked it alot. awsome read~
*KiMMiE*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-05-07 07:26 PM

I remember reading this one and it's nice to read it again. Nice to see you in here again Pixie

keep sharing ok?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-05-07 07:29 PM

now you KNOW this is my fave, and i read it before cuz it's already in my library!! HEHEHE

now go on wit ur bad self and keep writin this poo aight? LOL

Love ya sis
Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-05-07 07:35 PM

Teenie you already know I love this, so I don't really need to tell you again... but what the hey

-=Beanie=-

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-05-07 11:05 PM

Heya Justine!

So this is the poem you posted eh?
It's good! Very very good! *rubs his hands together* I see why it's your favourite.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-08 02:52 AM

this was a nice poem...great job and it sure is one of those poem you call your fav's thanks for sharing and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-05-08 09:58 AM

thanks for reposting this one.....I liked it

SEA

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

8 posted 2001-05-08 12:03 PM

This is really great!! I love the metaphor that you used with the sun, it fits so well and every word within this piece just went so well together. GREAT WORK!! I've never read anything from you before, but I think I am going to have to look for more of your work. This is going into my library for sure. Excellent!

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

9 posted 2001-05-08 02:21 PM

Yay

hehe once again i am so glad you guys liked this!! Thank you so much!
*Justine*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

10 posted 2001-05-09 10:41 PM

*bump*

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

11 posted 2001-05-09 10:52 PM

Ouch! HOT!!

Hehe

,
Beanie

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

12 posted 2001-05-15 02:38 PM

Sounds like a rough time!! I hope you get through it! You know i'm here for you.
Well done tho.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Elusive^
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 18
dancing fairy land

13 posted 2001-05-15 03:45 PM

*big grin* I like this..i like it alot..
enough said.

''I'll TAKE a QUIET life..a HANDSHAKE of CARBON monoxide with NO alarms AND no SURPRISES..''
'LaniDarkone'..underwent a change of name.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

14 posted 2001-05-15 03:56 PM

I don't remember reading this one which is a shame because I really liked it... thanx for reposting it... Mr mr Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

E-mail/Msn: Targetmrzu@hotmail.com

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

15 posted 2001-05-15 05:40 PM

thank you all for the replies!!

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

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