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The girl next door
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The girl next door |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
The emotional light inside makes me wick my mind cannot concentrate love is pouring down from my eyes That distend feeling reflects my love for her To many shallow words a heart full of faith The glimpse of her eyes says it all Every time that I see those lips say that name It makes me go crazy completely insane The girl next door she’s so lovable totally incredible unbelievable emotional shy and beautiful the girl next door she’s so sensible completely natural understandable irresistible shy and beautiful The burning flame lights a fire Inside of me it feels like a river of fullness I’m just so lost in my desire and she is so close but yet so far away wish I could take her instead of emptiness by the way she walks I am stunted Every time that I see those lips that her name It makes me go crazy completely insane The girl next door she’s so lovable totally incredible unbelievable emotional shy and beautiful the girl next door she’s so sensible completely natural understandable irresistible shy and beautiful She keeps doing all the things I like she keeps playing with my mind And all the time I’m blinded by the beauty of her eyes Second by second I don’t know why I’m capture by the light of her smile The girl next door she’s so lovable totally incredible unbelievable emotional shy and beautiful the girl next door she’s so sensible completely natural understandable irresistible shy and beautiful |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow good job hun..i like this alot...the whole girl next door is such a cute subject (i wish i had a boy next door hehe) anyways good job! *KiMMiE* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
the girl next door  one thing, I think wick is misspelled You did a great job on the poem a bit too long, but well done "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job...i enjoyed the read...and the repition wroked nicely...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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