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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
A streght inside that surprises many Ah how tightly she is holding on to her life Scared of her determination Does she know she has it? How quick can we knock her down So afraid of her strenghth Nothing stops her So afraid of her sorrow Seeing someone with that strenghth fall down So afraid to get to know her She reaches out her hand Will u push her way? (this is a weird one i wrote about myself so yeah i know its not good but hey thought i would share anywayz) as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. [This message has been edited by sleepymoongirl (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs* i love you hun! i liked this one but then agains i likes all of yourscuz u be rads hunnAys  im heres if u needs me netimse scarlets *hugs* tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Well, cool poem but... You posted 5 poems in a day here, and the rule is no more then three..i dont know what they are going to do about it, but i just wanted to let you know that OK?? just trying to help you for next time.. thanks  ~ Jeff ~ :) |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
opps i forgotz me sorry i won't post more then 3 any more |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice job on this poem. Yeah the 3 in a day rule is a very important one, it's to keep one person from pushing all the poems by all the other people down to the very bottom. Just keep this in mind. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You did a very nice job here. I enjoyed it. Keep in mind the 3-a-day rule. Nice work. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i posted my 3 today grrr..and i gots a good one now lol..neways...good job hun! *KiMMiE* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this poem. You are really coming out strong within the forums!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you've shown your emotions really well where was i when you posted 5  lol j/kwell, keep sharing i'd love to see more of yur work "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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