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luckyducky_505
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since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2001-05-06 05:33 PM

I wrote this poem during class one day. I had just broken up with my boyfriend about 3 days befroe this happened. He wanted to go out with this one girl in our school, this didn't bother me. She didn't know why she should go out with him after we just broke up. I gave her reasons and this is what came of it all.

You were the light of my life.
You were always beside me.
I loved the way you never cared about what they thought.

I miss the little things that you always did.
The way you used to hold me,
The way we used to kiss.
The way we fought over the little things,
The way we made up.

I miss and love you so very much.
I love you forever andyou mean so much.

Can I have you back?

[This message has been edited by luckyducky_505 (edited 05-06-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-05-06 05:58 PM

Hmm... this is a real pickle you are in. I wish you the best of luck with this, hopefully you'll get what you want out of it.
And if you don't, then keep your chin up.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-05-06 06:33 PM

i hope everything turns out ok for you, i know how hard it is to want someone back. great job on this, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-05-06 07:23 PM

This is a wonderful post. You put a lot of emotion into it. I'm sorry that you're in this situation. I hope things get better. In the mean time, keep writing, it helps

Nice work.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

4 posted 2001-05-07 02:23 AM

I liked this a lot, it is a very emotional piece with nothing but pure love behind it.
Good job.

~First they tell you, you can’t sleep alone in a strange place, then they tell you, you can’t sleep with somebody else~

luckyducky_505
Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

5 posted 2001-05-07 04:29 PM

thanks all for the reply's. This sit. is done and gone. I didn't get him back but he and I are still friends. We talk all the time, we told each other that no matter what there would always be that spot in our hearts for each other. I guess we can't always have what we want!!

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

6 posted 2001-05-07 08:01 PM

then it wasnt meant to bew..but atleast u stayed friends!
*KiMMiE*

good job!

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

7 posted 2001-05-07 08:38 PM

ahhh the throes of love *sighs* this situation, excuse my bluntness, sucks... i wish you the best of luck and i hope everything works out for the best. great post!
*Justine*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

Lovely_Kris
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 176

8 posted 2001-05-07 09:41 PM

How sweet I really enjoyed this. I think you did a great job and keep it up. Good luck and hope to read more.
Lovely_Kris

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-05-13 06:40 PM

Well done.....you're a very good sport about this....I wouldn't be....i'm evil hehe.

Good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

luckyducky_505
Member

since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

10 posted 2001-05-13 08:05 PM

Thanx everyone for the reply's and thoughts!!! I'm glad ya'll liked it!!!

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

11 posted 2001-05-13 09:06 PM

it's really wonderful, full of emotion, I likes I likes!! I hope things are better for you now...keep your chin up, and keep on smiling!!

*s*
Stace

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

12 posted 2001-05-14 01:08 AM

hi hi,
wow *states the obvious* that's a really crappy situation. i hope ur okay!! great poem by the way. whoever the guy was he didn't deserve u if he treated u like that!! hope u r okay.
-fear-

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

13 posted 2001-05-14 09:00 AM

Great job on the poem and I hope you are ok

Mr Mr Zu

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

14 posted 2001-05-23 07:32 PM

such gentle and sweet expressions
hope things work out
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

15 posted 2001-05-23 07:36 PM

this was sweet and nice even tho pretty much sad...but u expressed it so well...hope to see more and wish u luck on the situtaion

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

16 posted 2001-05-24 02:38 PM

Sounds like someone truely special to you, i hope you get them back

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