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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-05 05:49 PM


i could never say i love you enough
i could never show you how much i care
i could never be with you as much as i want
i could never be away from your side

just know that ill always love you
just know that ill always care
just know that i long to be with you
just know that i want to be by your side

just know that i do love you
just know that i do care
just know that i will be with you
just know that i will be by your side

i love you

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-05-05 05:54 PM


This is creative, TiffAy... and very beautiful.  Wonderful job.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

lonely*soul
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east haddam (moodus) ct :)
2 posted 2001-05-05 05:54 PM


im getting the feeling you love this guy...hehe good poem!!!!
        *KiM*

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3 posted 2001-05-06 01:38 AM


Well done on this one tiff. Hope to see more!
Quite sweet!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Faces_Of_Death
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Heaven's Parking Lot
4 posted 2001-05-06 01:41 AM


COOL!!!! I liked this one..
thought it was well written..

-Faces  

"It wasn't me, it was the one armed man!"

Fading Away
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5 posted 2001-05-06 11:38 AM


I really like this Tiffany.  I really like the creativity you've put into this piece.  Nice work.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

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