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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-04 10:52 PM

The Ocean breeze on golden sands
Sifting through my sunburned hands

Those days of fragile mists of rain
Those peaceful waves sing soft refrain

Seagulls search along the shore
Shinig shells from the ocean floor

Evenings bathed in God's silver light
Mornings dawn in God's gleaming light

These things I love will always be
All the beauty of the Summer Sea

Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on.....

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

1 posted 2001-05-04 11:20 PM

omg wow~~~!!! i most defenatly like this alot!!! it gives you that mental picture that alot of the poems in here cant (b.c they are feelings... lol) but wow...awsome job!!!
*KiM*

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-05-05 12:12 PM

The imagery in this piece is beautiful. Very nicely done. I enjoyed this.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2001-05-05 12:15 PM

i love this! but u knows that:P lol
*hugs* love ya ewoksters

tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-05-05 02:52 AM

Nice work there, ewoksters!

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-05 03:01 AM

This was great but did yuo mean to put the word LIGHT at the end of each verse in one of those stanza's?
anyhow, nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

6 posted 2001-05-05 08:22 AM

I noticed what Dopey did... but it still works. This was really good, I could almost see the ocean.

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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