Teen Poetry #4 |
its called 'will power' babbAy!!! :P |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i said id never do this i said i was strong i said i have will power i said i could resist i said i wouldnt do it but look at me now im on a freakin' diet and im eatin ICE CREAM! ...chocolate chip cookAy doughe yummAy:P “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” U in the dark u in the pain u on the run Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-04-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea..babaaaay...lol heh...ey this poem wasnt serious but wow...you used html just kiddin i thought this was cute tho keep writing tiff.....LOL ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-04-2001).] |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha, Tiffany. I know how you feel! Cute poem, thanks for sharing --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahaha well done....made me laugh. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
:O MY GOAL IN LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!! to make mr. sexAy laugh i can die happAys nows. go mes! thankie for all the comments guysas! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love the title! Yeah! It dragged me right in for the poem! And the poem started out sort of seriously, but ended off on you breaking your diet. Sweet! You always brighten my days and nights with your light-hearted poetry. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
this was cute.....kinda funny too cuz i promised myself yesterday i would stop eating anything sweet. and here i am reading your poem and eating teddy grahams!!! ack! oh well...lol no more cookies for me! Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
LOL...this poem made me smile..I LIKED IT A LOT!! I though it was all serious and all, but nope, you and ur diet..how cute?? Oh ya by the way how was your ice cream? |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
twas yummAy lols *wasnt really eatin ice cream* sowwAy guysas it just popped intos me head so there u gos! i wouldnt mind some chocolate chip cookAy dough bout nows thos. thankies for all the replys! muchs appreciateds!!!!! tiff “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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