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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-05-04 02:35 PM


i said id never do this
i said i was strong
i said i have will power
i said i could resist
i said i wouldnt do it
but look at me now
im on a freakin' diet
and im eatin ICE CREAM!
...chocolate chip cookAy doughe
yummAy:P




“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

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1 posted 2001-05-04 02:36 PM


yea..babaaaay...lol
heh...ey this poem wasnt serious
but wow...you used html
just kiddin i thought this was cute tho
keep writing tiff.....LOL

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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2 posted 2001-05-04 02:52 PM


Haha, Tiffany.  I know how you feel!  Cute poem, thanks for sharing  

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

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3 posted 2001-05-05 12:37 PM


Hahaha well done....made me laugh.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

knightlyshadows
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4 posted 2001-05-05 12:51 PM


:O MY GOAL IN LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
to make mr. sexAy laugh
i can die happAys nows. go mes!
thankie for all the comments guysas!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

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5 posted 2001-05-05 02:57 AM


I love the title!  Yeah!  It dragged me right in for the poem!
And the poem started out sort of seriously, but ended off on you breaking your diet.  Sweet!  
You always brighten my days and nights with your light-hearted poetry.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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6 posted 2001-05-05 12:24 PM


this was cute.....kinda funny too cuz i promised myself yesterday i would stop eating anything sweet. and here i am reading your poem and eating teddy grahams!!!  ack!  oh well...lol no more cookies for me!

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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7 posted 2001-05-05 12:50 PM


LOL...this poem made me smile..I LIKED IT A LOT!!
I though it was all serious and all, but nope, you and ur diet..how cute??
Oh ya by the way how was your ice cream?

knightlyshadows
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8 posted 2001-05-05 01:00 PM


twas yummAy lols *wasnt really eatin ice cream* sowwAy guysas it just popped intos me head so there u gos! i wouldnt mind some chocolate chip cookAy dough bout nows thos. thankies for all the replys! muchs appreciateds!!!!!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

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