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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-05-03 10:27 PM

You have no idea what it's like,
To be me looking at you.
Knowing that there is nothing,
In the world to say or do...
I wish you could see yourself,
Through my own eyes.
Understand and appreciate,
Wash away feelings of despise.
For once see,
Your eyes as majestic green blue.
Mystical and magical,
From my point of view.
For once notice,
Your smile so sweet,
So caring and Loving...
Puts you in a trace so deep.
For once find,
How your hands are so secure.
Saving me from the world,
With a love so pure.
For a moment,
Theres nothing i would not do.
To give you just a glimpse,
Of what its like to be looking at you.

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-03 10:52 PM

Simply beautiful Good job. I think you did an extraordinary piece of work

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-05-03 11:52 PM

I know this feeling.... there are a few people I feel this way about.
Wonderful job in expressing it.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-04 12:41 PM

wow!!!...
i really enjoyed the beauty of this poem..
awesome write...
i liked the way you discribed this kind of situation thru this poem..
it cant be any better written then this...
great job and keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-05-04 08:16 AM

this is definetlely a piece that i can relate to, i liked this a lot. you wrote this very beautifully, this is writing to be really proud of. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

5 posted 2001-05-04 08:26 AM

this was beautiful...i really enjoyed reading it.
i dont know how many times i feltlike grabing sumone and telling then what i thought of them..like really thoguht of then...just made them see how special they were in my eyes..

..thankx for sharing..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-05-04 10:02 AM

Thanx everyone!!! I love it when people can relate to my poems

Thanks for reading!!

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

7 posted 2001-05-04 11:25 AM

Hey I really like this one!! It's so sweet and well-written and Its going in my library. Good work, and hope to see more from you soon.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-05-04 05:04 PM

Wonderful job!!!! I enjoyed this very much!!!! You wrote this in a way that was touching....very touching.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

9 posted 2001-05-04 08:55 PM

this one is amazing it's so beautiful. wow!
keep it up
~katie

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-05-04 11:59 PM

Your thoughts are so beautiful! This is a great poem, and one that I can relate to as well *cough cough*
Nicely done, I really enjoyed this.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

11 posted 2001-05-08 06:14 PM

OUCH!!!
That is so magnificent.
I love it
~*stands up and applauds*~
keep sharing Shugar

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

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east haddam (moodus) ct :)

12 posted 2001-05-08 06:26 PM

wow..i have nothing but good things to say bout pip poems today..this one expecially..extrodinary meaning..and its well written

*KiMMiE*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2001-05-08 06:34 PM

wonderful!!!

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

14 posted 2001-05-08 06:47 PM

this was a beautiufl poem and i felt like replying again..i really enjoyed it the first time i do again...cya~

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

15 posted 2001-05-09 04:52 PM

Awww thank you everyone for replying and saying such nice things about my poem

It means a lot!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

16 posted 2001-05-09 08:59 PM

no Shugar.......Thank You

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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