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lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

0 posted 2001-05-03 09:24 PM

hey guys..another one of my songs..tell me whatcha think k?

when the sun is always dark
and theres storm clouds over head
and the world has turned its back on you
and theres nuttin to be said

(chorus)

look up
and the world will turn around for you
look up
it cant get much worse than this
i looked up
and pain turned into pure bliss
so look up
oh oh oh oh (hehe)

when darkness is consuming you
and your pillows your new best friend
and your thinking lots of crazy thoughts
and saying its the end

(:::chorus::

when nothing seems to go your way
and all you do is wrong
and no one wants to listen
just know it wont be long

look up
and the world will turn around for you
look up
things cant get much worse than this
i looked up
and pain turned into pure bliss
so look up

ooooh ohhhh oooohhh

k guys..it doesnt look the best on paper...but i think its good..and if you dont...too bad lol

*KiM*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-05-03 09:54 PM

Hey, I don't know what you have been defending your song in the post, cause i believe this song to be awesome. I do prefer MP3 files emailed to me though

hint hint

Keep it up Kimmie.
Keep writing poems and songs as well

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-03 10:02 PM

I liked this

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

3 posted 2001-05-03 10:59 PM

I liked this one too. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-05-04 12:05 PM

I really did like this one a lot too!  Your songwriting skills are impressing me, it's nice to see more people getting into songwriting these days.
Maybe I'll go and write one of my own.  Thanks for the inspirational read!
Definitely keep up with this.  I'd also like an MP3.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-04 12:38 PM

i really liked the lyrics on this one..
you are good at this..i hope you write some depressing song..hehe if you know what i mean

..so yea..
this was a great song..keep looking up..kim

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

6 posted 2001-05-04 08:10 AM

you have a lot of talent, i've been really amazed by the last two songs you've posted. you did a great job on this and i think it would sound perfect put to music. i hope i get to see lots more of these from you, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-05 12:32 PM

I really liked the song. I especially liked the line about your pillow becoming your own best friend. I felt you did very well on this song, Oh oh oh!!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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