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Le Capitan de L'Amour
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0 posted 2001-05-02 08:36 PM


Like a dream you are to me every night, as I gaze upon the stars I fall asleep thinking about you.
You my sweet darling that i adore so much, but a dream is not enough to explain the beauty of thee that brings you to me every night.

With the moon you come to make me a lunatic of love and desire, for this not to be a dream, for it to be true, for you to be real. Your blue eyes, your blond hair, your perfect figure, like a model you are. Too bad that like the dreams you just come by. But you know such beauty will not exist for a long time.

As i find you in my dream i desire a woman like you, but here i never thought i would find thee. As one night traveling gazing at the stars i find you beside me and with a sweet kiss we began a dream that would never end!.

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1 posted 2001-05-02 09:07 PM


Very well done. I enjoyed this!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-05-03 07:22 AM


Not too bad.  
~Allan

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3 posted 2001-05-03 01:56 PM


Aww.. this is sweet!  Nice work.

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

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