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Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2001-05-02 01:27 PM

Heres a poem......... its about my friend Maks (max).....such a good guy... this poem is yucky

To you my dearest friend,

You are my babe, my hero
my sunshine with little bits of clouds
You think you are the sexier one
but i don't think so

You sang to me when i was feeling blue
you strum your guitar with the guys
when I felt  like life was going to end
Your arms give big bear hugs
that always end up tickling me

I know you paid Johnny off
cause we all know i'm the sexier one
with the nice lips

Do we have something going on ?
I don't think so
Do you still enjoy ignoring me?
It hurts
Why do you lie to me?
Your such a fool
to think I don't know
that its really you on the phone

But hey I just told you everything
from happiness to death
from overweight to aneroxia
Who cares that you hurt me!

I sat on your lap, with your arms
trying to stop my sobbing

And now all you are to me is dirt.

                         With my friendship & love
                                   Regina xoxo

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

1 posted 2001-05-02 01:37 PM

this really didn't turn out the way that i was expecting it to... wow, let me catch my breath *cathes his breath* ok, the poem is great, truly heartfelt and beautifully written. it sounds like a rough situation, i really hope things get better between the two of you.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-02 02:38 PM

Weird Regi, i thought it was going to be loving but it was quite the opposite. I enjoyed it though. Hope all is well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

3 posted 2001-05-02 04:25 PM

awwwww.....milk

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

4 posted 2001-05-02 04:29 PM

lol@chas and all the chocolate and milk
umm ok i liked this poem. it turned out diff from wut i expecteds toos. confuzlin but goods

lol
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-02-2001).]

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-05-03 01:24 PM

thanks for your replies!!!! ddidnt mean to confuse you guys.

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

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