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ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06
Posts 143
SC, USA

0 posted 2001-05-01 08:39 PM


i feel like grrring right now (heres a pic of me hehe)this is jus something that popped into my head.

Grrrr:

I hate the way you dress
I hate those metal things you wear
I hate the way you’re always different
I hate the way that you don’t care
I hate the brand of shoes you wear
And how colorful you have to be
I hate the way you change your hair
And how you overlook me
I hate the way you talk
I hate the things you say
I hate the way you walk
I hate the way you see
I hate how you never understand
And how you always forget
I hate the way you dance
And the way you sit
I hate the way I look at you
I hate the way you make me feel
I hate the way you look at me
I hate the way I just can’t deal
I hate the way that I don’t know
And how you leave me asking why
I hate the way I love you
And how you make me cry



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lonely*soul
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since 2001-04-05
Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)
1 posted 2001-05-01 08:42 PM


some one sounds a bit hostile right bout now...lol...we all hate the way someone is..but hate is a srtong word, ya know???
      *KiM*

ethel lahootie
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Posts 143
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2 posted 2001-05-01 08:59 PM


i dont really hate him...i hate the way he hates me. so im not as mean as i sound darn!! haha. wel i hate everything bout him bc he makes me fall for him ALL over again ? i mean *hate* in a *good* way. hahah ~jO~
Isabel Galaxia
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3 posted 2001-05-01 09:39 PM


OUCH chica!  Uhoh jO's mad.  May I ask about whoooo?
Bel

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4 posted 2001-05-01 10:32 PM


This was a good way to vent out.
Nice job.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chas
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since 2001-04-08
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Lynn, ma
5 posted 2001-05-01 10:34 PM


Humm……..chocolate
knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14
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obscured vision
6 posted 2001-05-01 11:19 PM


um yea chocolate is still goods!  
lol theres always somebody that will make you feel this way! lol hope all goes wells.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06
Posts 143
SC, USA
7 posted 2001-05-02 04:22 PM


thanks for replying peeps! bel-i shouldnt have done that huh? stoopid of me! GEEZ!
thanks again
~jO~

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