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sinfully_seductive
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0 posted 2001-05-01 05:57 PM




What exactly is it that makes you hate me?
Is it that I'm me?
that I'm female?
or that I'm the REAL me and am in control of myself?
Tell me, what is it?

What is it?  I ask
Is it that I'm not afraid,
not afraid to live life?
that I don't give a care of what others think?
for others are incompetent idiots who know nothing
or is it that I'm the real me?
Tell me, just what is it?

What is it? I ask
Is it that my kind of feelings you've never known before?
that I'm wiling to give anything for you?
or is it that you're still naive and innocent?
Tell me, just what is it?

What is it? I ask
Is it that you don't know what life is worth?
that it's worth more than material objects?
material objects are incomparable to the joy and satisfaction of human love
or is it that you CHOOSE not to open yourself to your human instinct?
Tell me, what is it?

What is it? I ask
Is it that you're in denial,
in denial of everything around you?
that everyone will think less of you because you don't hate me?
or is it that you feel no one can and will never understand you?
Tell me, just what is it?

Maybe I'm wrong in all that I've written, but
Do you, in fact, hate me because I'm me?
If that's the case, then my thoughts on you are misconstrued
I never once assumed you to be the hag I'd always heard about but never met
If you do, in fact, hate me because I'm me,
then you are the one in need of judgment
For there was a time, a time not so long ago
When you, in fact, didn't hate me

same-sex couples are like kama sutra - beautiful but misunderstood!

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1 posted 2001-05-01 06:13 PM


All people who hate have one thing in common: ignorance. This person is probably ignorant of who you really are. If the realized what kind of person you were, there is no way they could hate. You are right in saying that they are the ones who are wrong, though. Great poem, thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

lonely*soul
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2 posted 2001-05-01 08:38 PM


love bug is sooo right...my mom always says its jelousy..but i dunt think so...ignorance is a great word to describe it  lol..but awsome poem

     *KiM*

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3 posted 2001-05-01 10:28 PM


I enjoyed the poem and Erica said it all right there.....read it again if you'd like. If not....then ok hehe....nice poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chas
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4 posted 2001-05-01 10:29 PM


Humm……..chocolate
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5 posted 2001-05-02 07:09 PM


Wow, chas.. very original reply.  I think I've seen it now quite a few times..
Love bug is very right.  She summed it up nicely.  Ignorance is the one thing in this world that I can't stand.  Very nice poem.  It's very powerful.. just know that you can't change that person.
Nice work.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

banburycross
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viginia
6 posted 2001-05-03 09:49 AM


I think i'm going to turn into a sheep for this reply and agree with Erica like everyone else.  you did a great job on this, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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