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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-05-01 01:35 PM


you always sneak up behind me
and give me a hug
you know i love these
i think they're the best
they're just so sweet
and endearing to me
the hugs from behind
that you sneak up to give

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-01 01:40 PM


Hey,

   Haha I do that to a friend of mine   she hates it and I usualy end up getting hit haha this is a cool poem and just for that it goes into my library (your 2nd today by the way ((hey that ryhmed)) ) Until your next poem

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viginia
2 posted 2001-05-01 01:40 PM


awww... this is short and really sweet, i .like this a lot.  unexpected hugs are the best, just the things to help me get through the day sometimes.  great job, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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3 posted 2001-05-01 10:03 PM


I was reading a Girl magazine....actually a woman's magazine....I think it was cosmo or something. Anyway it had the top 46 reasons women love us men.......the behind hugs was one of them.....others mentioned that i remember:

1. Boxer Briefs

2. Shower Mohawks

3. Running with our dogs

4. HOw we watch sports like it's the end of the world if we lose.

5. HOw we put our hand on the small of your backs and guide you through a party.

6. Sleepy Head

7. How we act so macho with our friends and then when it's time to ask a girl out we're shy.

Well that's all I can remember....geesh...
oh well!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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4 posted 2001-05-02 10:54 PM


Yeah, Javier is subscribed to Cosmo, after all.  
Nice, cute poem, Tiff.  *gives you a hug*  
Aww  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-05-03 04:10 AM


yea..
i heard gurls be lovin' that hug from behind..
you expressed your love for them hugs well...in this poem..keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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6 posted 2001-06-05 07:06 PM


~*hugs*~  
girl....you say the sweetest things
he must really be special

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Allan, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michele,

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7 posted 2001-06-05 11:18 PM


Yes, love those kind  
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8 posted 2001-06-06 01:26 AM


awww... its my tiff!  *hugs*  man, I'm back from the dead. or so it seems.  I love your poetry.  I wish I had more time to hang out online with you and talk about it.  

jo

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

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9 posted 2001-06-06 07:58 AM


You wrote about hugs!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   I Love hugs!!! They are just so great!! Hehehehehe ok im done   Short and sweet and so Hugable! Love it  
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10 posted 2001-06-06 08:46 AM


hugs good job.  short and sweet
Evylyn
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11 posted 2001-06-06 11:51 AM


*Giggles*  That's so adoreable, Tiff!  It really brightened my day.  *Beams*  

"The only thing that boggles the mind is the mind itself."

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12 posted 2001-06-06 01:56 PM


tiff, your poems are always so cute  

Dont knock on deaths door ...... ring the bell and run......he hates that

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