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HappyPretender
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since 2001-03-06
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Prince George, VA

0 posted 2001-05-01 09:08 AM


I Am Here

Come to me
Share you fears
I will listen
I'm always here
I'll try to help
And give advice
All just to
Chase away your fright

Don't be afraid
To come to me
You can confide in me
Can't you see
No one will know
Of what you say
Your story will be
Left alone

I am here
Don't you know
I can listen
I can talk
I have time
Let's take a walk.


<3~*Rachael*~<3
*we can't become what we need to be by remaining what we are*


© Copyright 2001 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-01 09:29 AM


This is really nice  
vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
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2 posted 2001-05-01 10:17 AM


Awww this is really cute.  I think some people need to know that there's someone out there who's willing to listen to them and, assuming you wrote this about somebody, I suggest that you give it to them.  I like it.  Good work.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-05-01 11:39 AM


this was a sweet poem..
i liked it..the way u showed ur caring discription
thanks for sharing..keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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4 posted 2001-05-01 09:50 PM


Very honorable of you. I enjoyed the poem. Sounds like you're a great friend to this person.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chas
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since 2001-04-08
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Lynn, ma
5 posted 2001-05-01 10:41 PM


Humm……..chocolate
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