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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-29 11:28 PM


UGH, ITS DRIVIN ME CRAZY!
THE QUESITONS
THE ANSWERS
THE NEVER-ENDING PROBING
into.......
      
        my mind
          my heart
            my soul


OMG OMG OMG!!!!! allan gave me a trophy for this!:O
yea will he misspelteded it but o wells:P lol
wayfinder00: *hands you a twophy*


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-29-2001).]

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-29 11:29 PM


Ouch!  The impact here was very nice, it sort of trailed off at the end though.  
Good work.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-04-29 11:36 PM


Nice twophy!  
banburycross
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3 posted 2001-04-30 01:03 PM


I liked the format of this a lot, i thought it was very creative.  great job, keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-04-30 03:23 PM


Yeah this was very creative...I enjoyed.  
  ~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked.  And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears."   ~Kahil Gibran

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5 posted 2001-04-30 10:28 PM



Nice!

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6 posted 2001-05-09 12:52 PM


interesting  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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