In the hills of my heart, Queen Elizabeth reigns".

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Marshalzu

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0 posted 2001-04-29 04:47 PM

“ In the hills of my heart, Queen Elizabeth reigns”.

I dream of all her majesty,
She’s my queen of hearts,
The only thing that intrests me,
Is love and how it starts.

Amongst the hills of England,
Let Elizabeth’s beauty reign,
She the one that makes things grand,
And drives my mind insane.

Her “Daddy” was a general,
Our meeting like Waterloo,
She makes me feel so vunerable,
And there is nothing I can do.

Amongst the hills of England,
Let Elizabeth’s beauty reign,
She the one that makes things grand,
And drives my mind insane.

She is a tiny mountain,
But she’s way above my head,
She bathe’s in beauty’s fountain,
It’s not me she’s bound to wed,

Amongst the hills of England,
Let Elizabeth’s beauty reign,
She the one that makes things grand,
And drives my mind insane.

Queen of all old England,
Her Beauty reigns supreme,
The flames of love are fanned,
She’s more than just some dream.

--- At the moment I am fighting chronic writers block and this is the most recent piece I have written.
<<<_ Marshal Zu_>>>

[This message has been edited by Marshalzu (edited 04-29-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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1 posted 2001-04-29 08:00 PM

I enjoyed this a lot. Very well done!

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Allan Riverwood

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2 posted 2001-04-29 08:36 PM

Writers block =

This piece was not too bad at all though, I liked the repititions of stanzas. Queen Liz would be proud!

~Allan

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anonymous albert ?

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3 posted 2001-04-30 02:43 PM

whats writer's block anyway

haha..yea..but i think you did a nice job on the poem...
keep writing

...?

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anonymousfemale
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4 posted 2001-04-30 02:47 PM

Interesting Mr Zu. There is nothing quite like reading a piece about the Queen...oh unless you want to get her away from your country.

Just kidding. It was a great piece. Really well done.

~AF~

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Marshalzu

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5 posted 2001-04-30 04:26 PM

Ahh but is it about the Queen? or is it about the Queen of my heart?
Anyway thanx for all the responses? yeh

Zu

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cherish
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swimming in fairy floss...........

6 posted 2001-05-08 04:10 AM

heheheh..welli couldnt help envisioning the queen when i was reading this...you know how you said that she was atiny mountain?..yeah well i think that that's what set me off thinking that maybe you WERE talking about the lady whos 'bust' is on all our coins..heheh...good job tho..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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