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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Short poem about the duplexity of my life. I wear shirts and ties to work, and echo and billabong on the weekends. Somebody at work saw me out side of work and barely noticed me and told me that I "pull of Mr. innocent nicely at work" So that was the inspiration for this poem. ~Professional punk~ Professional by day, punk by night I try to live out' the spot light Skate boards, guitar, Echo and gwar (hed) pe and Relative Ash Factory 81, throwin' a bash This is my life on days off work At a concert, instead is where I'll lurk Professional by day, punk by night I try to live out' the spot light [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
haha...good one jay... i liked the poem... start posting more man.. and keep writing  ohh..yea i think u should change the title it might get thought of it in a different way...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
now i can relate to that! hed pe, gwar, orgy and papa roach, nin thats my kinda music, then i dress up for a band concert or something and no one knows the difference its fun to play tricks on people like that! i am blinded by the silence of a breaking heart... i cant see myself |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Haha YEAH BUBBA! Lovin' it, lovin' it.  ~Carly "Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Awesome job on this poem, I really like it   "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey now.......I'm no punk and I play guitar. *bows* Anyhow, very nicely done. I loved the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice to see something from you. Liked it loads, well done. Keep up with the double life. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you every one Yeah Albert I know the title's mis-leading but I don't like titles that make sense... they're not as fun... hehe CLBinLOVE ~ I think your do understand... it is like a big trick and I love it. The same ppl that see me when I'm all dressed up and complement me on my manners are the same ppl that give me dirty looks when I'm heading to the concerts. FOOLS, FOOLS I tell ya... hehe and I love messin' with them. Anyhow thanks again everyone [This message has been edited by IsGona (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh Jay, I'm sorry I missed this one when you first wrote it. It's wondeful...lol I think everyone has different aspects to themselves, and that's what makes us beautiful. By the way, I think that whole skateboarding concert thing is great... I've known those types of people forever, and it's all loads of fun... but...umm, occasionally, you run into a "punk" that has nothing going for them, and no ambition. It's so terrific that you have a job, and you write poetry... you just sound like the perfect guy...quite well-rounded. Love ya! Write more for me to read...hehe Jenn "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I just realized your picture is very fitting for this one "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
GWAR ROCKS!! gotta love the gwar. i liked this piece a lot, definetely one that i can relate to. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Ya! rock on Jason!!!!! ya well us punks....can be sweet and innocent...(looks away) im a good child!!lol great poem!!!! I love the title Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I can really relate to this one... well done... A great read. Zu. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
YAAAY... more replies *so happy* lol yeah Lake the picture is fitting... it's like my dark side and my angelic(is that a word) light side awww... Jenn, you are far to kind to me, but thank you. Ina - Hell yeah, us "punks" are way inocent *looks over his shoulder* .... sometimes...  Banburycross - hehe yup, they put on a pretty cool show. zu - Rock on buddy. viva los mocosos |
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