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luckyducky_505
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since 2001-04-29

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Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2001-04-29 02:05 PM

Will I ever see you again?
Your face, your smile, your cute brown eyes?
Will you ever hold me under the stars like you did that evening?
Why must you live so far away and why must I wonder if i'll ever see you again?
I wonder every day and every night about a face i once sought.
What's your real name instead of your nick name?
Will I ever see you again?

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

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1 posted 2001-04-29 02:10 PM

"WELCOME TO PASSIONS"
hope you like it here

and by the discription of the poem..
this seems to be a different kind of love..
i hope things will turn out the best
and nice job on the poem
and keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Ina
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since 2000-10-09

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Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2001-04-29 02:26 PM

Welcome to passions!
You will really enjoy it here.
Great first post.
hope to see you posting and replying.

REgina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

LoveBug

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3 posted 2001-04-29 04:56 PM

Welcome to Passions!

This is a wonderful first post. It must be hard to ask yourself this question, and I hope things work out for you. Thanks for sharing.

PS-check your e-mail

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

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On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2001-04-29 05:38 PM

Welcome to Passions

Good job on your first post, I hope you enjoy it here

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2001-04-29 05:38 PM

Oh no, not the double post syndrome again

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 04-29-2001).]

Child of the Stars

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since 2000-09-07

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Ann Arbor, MI

6 posted 2001-04-29 05:59 PM

Welcome to Passions

This was a good first post...I hope everything turns out peachy!!
~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked. And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears." ~Kahil Gibran

Dopey Dope

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since 2000-08-30

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7 posted 2001-04-29 08:23 PM

Welcome to Passions!
I enjoyed the short poem a lot!
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

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Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-04-29 08:46 PM

Interesting post, where you said "what's your real name instead of your nickname" made me think you met this person in a chatroom or something.

Is that the case?
Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I look forward to reading more from you.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

luckyducky_505
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since 2001-04-29

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Kentucky, USA

9 posted 2001-04-30 04:51 PM

Thanks for the responses!! It's about this guy I met one weekend at a baseball game. He was so perfect but after we sepnt all weekend together and he held me under the stars and kissed me under the stars I wondered if i'd ever see him again. The only thing that could stop my crying was to write about it. I cried fro 3 days and on the 3rd day this is what i felt.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2001-04-30 07:51 PM

Awww!! omg now that i know the story behind it it's even more AWWWWW!! But lemme welcome you to passions!! This is an awesome place to express your feelings =o) i hope you do see him again! That sounds so romantic hehehe...

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

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viginia

11 posted 2001-04-30 09:07 PM

Welcome to passions!!

this is a wonderful first post, i really liked the unique way you expressed yourself. you can tell that this is really heartfelt. i hope to read lots more from you in the future.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Jenn Cirrincione

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12 posted 2001-04-30 09:09 PM

You don't know his real name??
That struck me for some reason...
This was very hert-felt.
Keep writing...
And welcome btw...

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

Fading Away

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13 posted 2001-05-01 01:50 PM

Welcome to Passions! This is a great first post. I look forward to seeing more. Nice work.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Linc

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The Backstreet Boy

14 posted 2001-05-01 02:00 PM

oops sorry about posting twice :'( forgive me???

[This message has been edited by Linc (edited 05-01-2001).]

Linc

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The Backstreet Boy

15 posted 2001-05-01 02:00 PM

Hey,

WELCOME TO PASSIONS
Great poem too

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

16 posted 2001-05-01 04:46 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Glad you decided to join us here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy reading as well as sharing you own work.

I enjoyed your first post.
I definitely is very heart felt
I hope you do see him again

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

luckyducky_505
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since 2001-04-29

Posts 53
Kentucky, USA

17 posted 2001-05-03 05:21 PM

thanks everybody!! I don't know his real name b/c nobody calls him by it. Plus when i was with him i wasn't completely thinking straight; besides not asking him his real name i left a 4 year old alone at a park. I learned a lesson...always ask a their name and never leave a 4 yr. old alone at a park!!!

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24

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land of cheese (Wisconsin)

18 posted 2001-05-05 11:35 PM

hey! wow this poem was pretty kooly. i've never had an expeirence like that...kinda jealous ;-) well except for the part about leaving a four year old behind lol. good first post n keep writin!
-fear-

lonely*soul
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east haddam (moodus) ct :)

19 posted 2001-05-05 11:41 PM

good job AND WELCOME TO PASSIONS i know youll love it here..check out the teen chat forums (under disscussions) youll get to know us all better

*KIM*

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