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CLBinLOVE
Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-04-29 01:10 PM

i sit here
in silence
waiting for a reply
waiting for some indication
that everything will turn out ok

i watch other people
they go through the let down
they thought that everything was ok
it wasnt
how will it turn out for me?

i see yet others
heads bowed in knowing defeat
they get their answer
they are suprised and overjoyed
how will it turn out for me?

i sit back
try to breath
try to control the shaking in my hand
but all i can think is:
how will it turn out for me?

finally my time has come
i collect myself
to recieve my fate
i look at the piece of paper
i passed

~anyone who has ever not done too well in a class can understand where im comming from with this one
i really dislike recieving tests, especially when i know ive done bad on one.
i tried to write it so that you would want to know what i was talking about throughout the whole poem, and in the end its not as serious as you thought
tell me how it worked?
thanks

i am blinded by the silence of a breaking heart... i cant see myself

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

1 posted 2001-04-29 01:19 PM

Good lord child! It was all serious and stuff....ugh.

. Nice job chico
Te amo,
Bel

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-04-29 01:38 PM

The ending was quite a surprise to me. Your little scheme worked in that respect. I know what it's like to be anxious over a grade, and you describe it really well. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-29 01:39 PM

This endeavour was a success, you certainly caught me off guard.
Very well done.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Smlie4u87
Junior Member

since 2001-04-28

Posts 16

4 posted 2001-04-29 01:46 PM

Hey that poem is so good. I hope to read more be you.

Always,
Tracy

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-29 08:05 PM

It was good. I liked it. Not your best though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-05-03 05:30 PM

Whoa this was such strong emotion over getting a test back..but im not criticizing it in anyway cuz thats what i was like this morning for my bio test but i got a 91!! yay!! LoL Im glad you passed =o)

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

7 posted 2001-05-03 05:33 PM

Hey this is good, i havent seen much of yours so i cant compare but good keep it up.

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

8 posted 2001-05-03 05:34 PM

Haha, you caught me really off guard there. But great poem all the same!

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