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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-04-29 03:24 AM


i have to sneeze
but it wont come out!!
dont you hate that feeling?
the tickling in the back of your nose...
the pressure building up...
and thinking 'finally, release...!'
but opps, nevermind it didnt happen
dang it! i have to sneeze
but it just wont come out!!

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-29 03:37 AM


Go outside and look at the sun.  That seriously helps, it sounds funny but it does.
For lack of that, turn on a lamp and look into the light.  Looking at a very bright light will get you sneezin' in no time.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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2 posted 2001-04-29 01:31 PM


Allan's right, looking at bright light helps it come! If you are talking about symbolism, however, I think I can relate. Either way, great writing. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
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3 posted 2001-04-29 01:34 PM


this was soo deeeep..

hehe...but for reals tho..
i thought this was creative in its own way..
you write about different subjects i liked that..
keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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4 posted 2001-04-29 07:38 PM


ACHOOOO!!!!!!!!!

hehe, i did it ha ha!!
Aren't you jealous?!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood
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5 posted 2001-04-29 11:48 PM


I know I am.  
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6 posted 2001-05-04 12:58 PM


I know exactly what you mean.  it does make me mad when that happens  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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