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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-04-29 02:57 AM


ok this one is gonna really confuzle all u ppls unless u knows me and ewoksters lol (we are weird so be forewarned):P lol newayz the spellin and grammer are like that on purpose just so u knows!

lookin out me window
and what dos i see?
ewok standin there
and hes eatin all me chikin!!
i rush out to stop him
cuz i dos loves me chikin
and wut does he dos?!
he beats me wit me sox :O
i stops in utter amazement
as a sox plops me in da face
then he takes a bite of chikin
and really makes me mayad!
i jumps on him
and threatens his life
but all he dos is laughs
so i then i starts to tells ppls his whole name
and that stops him cold
he cowers up before me
and so i gets up
i grabs me chikin backs
but i leaves him me sox
(cuz thoses was a gift to him)


lol its not finished yets:P so be prepared! lol

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-04-29 03:05 AM


Riveting tale!  I was on the edge of my seat!     LOL
I honestly loved this, the way you spelled some words (chikin!! ) and your odd sort of dialect added a lot to the poem.  Great job, I love the tone!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
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2 posted 2001-04-29 06:10 PM


*stares at it*
This was interesting hehe.
I liked it......ewok must be happy!

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I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-04-29 11:48 PM


Gotta add this to my library!  
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4 posted 2001-04-30 03:25 PM


Hahaha....yeah this rocked! A library piece for sure, on the grounds of pure laughter.  
  ~Carly

"Your joy is your sorrow unmasked.  And the self-same well from which your laughter rises was often-times filled with your tears."   ~Kahil Gibran

MoeRocko
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5 posted 2001-04-30 04:37 PM


Haha  Yes Ewok IS happy. Lol
TY Tiff  nice one   Hehe

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6 posted 2001-05-09 12:28 PM


ha ha
Excellent work  
library time

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