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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
twirling, twirling not knowing what i see everything moves so fast makes it all a blur melding together to create perfect blends a perfection you could never see unless you are twirling, twirling “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This one was great. I loved the movement described. It made the whole thing more visual. Thanks fo rhte great read! *~*Amanda*~* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm dizzy...  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this...but....don't write a poem called Falling, ok? Nicely done.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
beautiful read Tiff. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was so short, but I didn't think that it needed to be any longer. It's very well done, I like.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was nice...thanks for sharing it tiff...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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