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Lady of the Night |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Caught in a shaft of moonlight she doesn't know she's seen. She creeps into the garden tiptoeing all the way. I watch her pass between the shadows and the light. In and out of secrecy she casts her silken web. She lures some by her beauty but mostly by her spell. She gives them no mercy she doesn't show regret. Strong and proud she is not knowing she is seen. Creeping into the garden caught in a shaft of moonlight. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent Tiffany....excellent! |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
beautiful tiffany oh baby i love you so much i hope you know that and i know you do i cant wait to just be in your arms forever and i know we will be someday untill that day i will cry every minute and also be joyous for i at least have you in my life i love you tiffany i want to be with you always ben redshaw the great and deeply in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Coco Junior Member
since 2001-01-28
Posts 48 |
A beautiful poem you share here and I thank you for a most enjoyed read... |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
thanx SEA  tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this one a lot Tiff! well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*wonders if nebody has figured out wut im talkin bout in it yets* :P lol “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I just hope you're not talking about yourself on this one. But when it comes to the poem, I loved it. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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That girl Megz cant write New Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 7State: Confusion |
*raises hand* oOoh OoOoH!! I know what it's about!!! hehe....but, i'm not going to teLL b/c that would ruin it for everyone else...*nods* Luv ya tifFerOo! |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i like this...good job  (ben loves you...if ya didnt catch on!) |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really good, you write very well and I always enjoy your poems. I thought it was cool how it all flowed so well yet didn't rhyme. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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DarkSilver Junior Member
since 2001-05-21
Posts 33Six O'clock High! |
Beautiful Poem I'm actually just a little disapointed, I wanted it to be longer. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is intriguing! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job...beutifully written...i enjoyed the read...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
I really like d this 1 tiff. great job!~IRIS  i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack |
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