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Dreams of Tears (paradelle)

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lonely*soul
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25 posted 05-04-2001 10:20 PM       View Profile for lonely*soul   Email lonely*soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lonely*soul

ok so its a new format..but personally this doesnt appeal to me..srry, but as a poem, its good!   (cant win em all hehe)

        *KiM*
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26 posted 05-08-2001 06:34 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

What can I say?
Somethings are just expected already  
hope you understand that

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

mistic
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27 posted 05-08-2001 06:49 PM       View Profile for mistic   Email mistic   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mistic

I really liked the style. Great poem!  
cpalmer
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28 posted 09-07-2001 07:22 PM       View Profile for cpalmer   Email cpalmer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cpalmer

Allan,
This is really awesome...you are gonna have to teach me how to write one!  Got any challenges for me!
Hugs
Cindi
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29 posted 03-04-2003 11:35 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

I can't believe I missed this one, glad that I have got to it know though, great writing in possibly my favourite form.

Andrew
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30 posted 03-10-2003 09:43 PM       View Profile for Yu Lan   Email Yu Lan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Yu Lan

"and her dreams pull her hair back" <-- THAT is a gorgeous line.. Bravo Allan, this is awesome. ^^ I haven't come accross this kind of poem before, but I can see you've done well, to make each line necessary, instead of the poem sounding repetitive or trying.. I enjoyed it.

Bless your cotten sockies, you poetic maniacs. ^_^

Love - Lynne

 
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